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Pedroh
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not very good, but im sure ginger you can fix the it and make it look better

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1Shot1Kill
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Pedroh wrote:
not very good, but im sure ginger you can fix the it and make it look better

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You just need to make the outline of the weapons thick as the outlines of the text, and then it will be perfect. Maybe add a gradient pattern thing like the text too (white to a slightly darker white).
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Pedroh wrote:
not very good, but im sure ginger you can fix the it and make it look better
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It's great!
Although I'm not sure how it would look with the grenade dot on the "i".
I will experiment, but yours is done quite well.
1Shot1Kill wrote:
You just need to make the outline of the weapons thick as the outlines of the text, and then it will be perfect. Maybe add a gradient pattern thing like the text too (white to a slightly darker white).
mhm I think increasing the outline would obscure too much of the text. Maybe keep the thin outlines on the inside, and have regualr outlines on the outside?
Also, In my experience white gadient does not work very well, It just makes it look really dull and grey. Also having it white focuses more attention on the text.

I think keep the white.
danhezee
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I think the white spade and rifle need to be colored to match the color styles of the words in the logo.
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danhezee wrote:
I think the white spade and rifle need to be colored to match the color styles of the words in the logo.
ok will try this too
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http://imgur.com/DwgmlQw,94IqsN0,nRER19a,wRCa6w0#0
1 style to match the style in the text and other without
Maybe these models from slab6 would be better or something similar can be use rather than something white or FaultChecks models
Also if the & is going to be white may i suggest it being off white a little, i think it looks like isn't incomplete at the current state
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Skynet wrote:
http://imgur.com/DwgmlQw,94IqsN0,nRER19a,wRCa6w0#0
1 style to match the style in the text and other without
Maybe these models from slab6 would be better or something similar can be use rather than something white or FaultChecks models
Also if the & is going to be white may i suggest it being off white a little, i think it looks like isn't incomplete at the current state
mhm yeah. Will try and use these, but the real problem here is the placement of the weapons. It's hard to find a good place to put them without over doing it. A logo needs to be simple, It needs to get across the point of the site without cramming tonnes of stuff into it.
We currently have:
> A clean simple style- Same style as AoS.
> A green and blue pallete- team colours.
> Some pixelated textures- nod to the art style and retroness of AoS.
> A bold font, grenades and an explosion- War theme.

Notice that we have three things that symbolise war themes, yet we are still trying to add more... IMO, we should hold back on the guns instead of trying to fit them in because "it would be cool."

Also by off white, are we talking an eggy colour or a grey?
Pedroh
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dan said he wanted something with color

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Pedroh wrote:
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Now there's sexy! But uh, whats with that grey patch in the lower right corner?
Pedroh
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idk i cant seem to erase it

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Pshhh, Your Shovel's Durpy.... H8ter
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I think this is my favorite. Nice use of the explosion to fill in the blank space. Simple but nice.

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This one looks good too, but the spade is a bit derpy looking.
Sorry FaultCheck
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Pedroh wrote:
dan said he wanted something with color

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This looks great, my only complaint is the size they seem too small
also this is good placement for the guns, looks like they are being blown from the grenade explosion
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FaultCheck made a logo
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danhezee wrote:
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FaultCheck made a logo
I hate those gradients on the guns.. Wood stocks aren't that shiny. If they were subdued or tinted slightly orange, so the shiny part wasn't grey, but a light brown instead. I think they would look nicer.
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Pedroh wrote:
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I like the direction this one is headed. Would make more sense if the spade was above "build" and the gun was above "shoot."
danhezee wrote:
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FaultCheck made a logo
This is nice too, but where's the spade?
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